The woman not to cross.

Every day she walks the same path,
They all follow in single file,
Never daring to speak a word,
Or put on their faces a smile.

For She is evil through an through,
Her poisonous tongue will cut through you.
An hypnotic stare from her eyes,
Will freeze you to the spot if you tell her lies

In Her presence, blue skies will turn black,
From her mouth just one word,
Your happiness will vanish,
And day becomes night, it is so absurd.

Remember never to cross her,
For the Black Queen kills her prey,
She will give her love then leave you,
Another broken pawn for just another day….

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  • yes me on Feb 21, 2010

    Scary read Judy you got probs with the kids….
    Try a Beano or a Dandy works for me…. he he

  • ceegirl on Feb 21, 2010

    A very evil woman. I would stay away from her.

  • willyonline on Feb 21, 2010

    Great writing, I wish all the best…!!!

  • neet on Feb 21, 2010

    Interesting…………..I wud certainly maintain a distance!

  • T. S. Lewis on Feb 21, 2010

    This type of woman would make me want to walk around with my eyes closed because I do not want to be turned to stone.

  • chellsy on Feb 21, 2010

    love your poetry

  • chellsy on Feb 21, 2010

    great poem

  • Ranjan Mathews on Feb 21, 2010

    Cross my heart sacred
    For nightmares such bred
    I have a stallion thoroughbred
    Who can instil some dread.

  • sambhafusia on Feb 21, 2010

    Excellent share…………thought provoked…..thanks for sharing this…

  • Snooky on Feb 21, 2010

    Whew! for a minute I thought you were going to talk about me.

  • Carol M Creasey on Feb 21, 2010

    Powerful writing!

  • 8Shei8 on Feb 21, 2010

    So chilling! I am even afraid of the Black Queen. Well write.

  • jimbob1 on Feb 21, 2010

    Hey J…she sounds incredibly loathsome should she ever be crossed. Thank you for writing the warning. This is actually a very incredible and powerful write. Very well done. It got another of my I Like It votes because it is so deserving. Thank you.

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