The heart that bleeds.

When you’re hurt, the heart bleeds

Somewhere along in the bitterness

You seem to be lost

With that bleeding heart

Had you known better,

You would’ve stopped your bleeding heart

 

The way they look at you, it hurts no more

The way they treat you, it hurts so much more

Somewhere along in the bitterness

You leave your self

With that bleeding heart

Had you known better,

You would’ve cried it out

 

They start to accuse you,

Some sort of deceit, some sort of misunderstanding

You stare at them in disbelief

They don’t look back at you

Somewhere along in the bitterness

You lose your self

With that bleeding heart

Had you known better

You would’ve chosen to lose those friends

 

They begin to raise their voice,

“You lower yours”, grant them one last choice

Somewhere along in the bitterness

You leave them

With a bleeding heart

Had they known better

They wouldn’t have messed with someone like you

 

Fatema

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  • Judi Eddy on Feb 24, 2010

    Another good write. judi

  • qasimdharamsy on Feb 24, 2010

    Nice one….I like it….

  • Fatema on Feb 24, 2010

    thanx judi :)
    thanx qasim :)

  • Hepsi.M on Feb 26, 2010

    wow..very well written

  • Fatema on Feb 26, 2010

    hey thanx , i didnt knw this one was good

  • diamondpoet on Feb 26, 2010

    Great poem and well written, thanks

  • Fatema on Feb 26, 2010

    hey thanks

  • Fatema on Feb 26, 2010

    hey thanx

  • drelayaraja on Feb 26, 2010

    Such a lovely poem :)

  • aniket on Feb 26, 2010

    so true

  • Precious Illusions on Feb 26, 2010

    sad…but true to the heart…touching a cord.

  • Fatema on Feb 27, 2010

    thank you all

  • Silent Wasp on Mar 1, 2010

    Beautifully written :D Emotions mould our lives.

    Thanks for the great read Fatema :D

  • Fatema on Mar 1, 2010

    thank you for your words :)

  • joyhyena29 on Mar 1, 2010

    well done^^

  • Fatema on Mar 2, 2010

    thank you

  • Sushant94 on Mar 2, 2010

    right! great poem! more of an encourager for heart broken! but still awesome!

  • Fatema on Mar 2, 2010

    hey thank you !

  • RAJEEV BHARGAVA on Mar 2, 2010

    here is another excellent poem, beautifully expressed. it is very rare treat to read a poem about the heart in this manner. i enjoyed it thoroughly. the heart is probably the most experienced organ in our bodies.

  • RAJEEV BHARGAVA on Mar 2, 2010

    another beautifully expressed poem and this time about the emotions from the heart. very professionally scripted. indeed, the heart is the most experienced organ in our bodies. i love this poem.

  • Cynthia Cox on Mar 2, 2010

    What is good for the goose is good for the gander~One broken heart twist for another:) as is the reality of life goes. Great talent of poetry you do have. Thanks for sharing.

  • Fatema on Mar 3, 2010

    hey thanx :) you all inspire me to write more , thanx :)

  • AstralMelody on Mar 3, 2010

    Another great one!

  • Fatema on Mar 4, 2010

    thanks

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