How much can you feel when you are blindfolded.

A silk scarf, a new experience,

I´m blindfolded my heart beats faster

How much can I trust

Should I be scared

But before my closed eyes

million colors suddenly appeared

there was nothing to fear

there was no darkness just so many new senses that

I was never aware before

My body stops existing

it was replaced with infinite nervous terminals

showing me how to feel

Finally my imagination filled my mind with tender scenes

everything I wanted to see

Just been a moon in outer space

a super hero, maybe a beauty or just a real love

I can be anything

I can be anyone

Blindfolded… I have to trust in the person I love.

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  • RAJEEV BHARGAVA on Nov 11, 2010

    that was a really lovely poem, full of imagery. i could feel just as you are feeling and the descriptions are so true to life. when one is blindfolded, they really do see so many different shades of color and their imagination can take them and make them into anything they choose. the last verse was the best, as it is all to do with true love and trust. i enjoyed this poem very much. thanks Luna, for the lovely share.

  • MaxBuceo on Nov 11, 2010

    Interesting post, i like it

  • Saurav Banerjee on Nov 11, 2010

    I can say blindfolded that all your posts are great.

  • yes me on Nov 11, 2010

    Liked this one, Luna cheers

  • Jane Campbell on Nov 11, 2010

    Great one, Luna!!

  • Luna Morena on Nov 11, 2010

    Thanks so much dear friends for your kind comments!

  • Kaye TM on Nov 11, 2010

    very lovely poem luna

  • giftarist on Nov 11, 2010

    That was one wonderful piece. Liked it!

  • LCM Linda on Nov 11, 2010

    Well said. Lovely poem. Nice share.

  • PSingh1990 on Nov 11, 2010

    Nice Share.

    :-)

  • papaleng on Nov 12, 2010

    Beautiful and well-composed piece.

  • Starpisces on Nov 12, 2010

    well written… sometimes we can feel though blind folded, sometimes not blind folded yet we cannot see much

  • Brewed Coffee on Nov 13, 2010

    Not being able to see can be scary….but it helps if we have people we can trust

  • SharifaMcFarlane on Nov 15, 2010

    Beautiful poem.

  • Judy Sheldon on Nov 15, 2010

    Being able to trust is vital in any relationship. This is a pretty and imaginative piece.

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