Bliss

Neva Flores on Feb 21, 2010

Tags: delight, escstasy, fire, love

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So smooth you flow into my air………….

So smooth you flow into my air
The very air I breathe
Surrounding me with delight
And everything I need

Your kisses burn a trail
Of fire inside of me
To surrender to your love
Is pure ecstasy

We fuse and merge into one
Such bliss words cannot define
Your touch upon my skin
Is heavenly divine

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Comments (9)

ganeshgolha on Feb 21, 2010
nice one…
Muhammad Sohaib Roomi on Feb 21, 2010
nice Picture and great poem
Anuradha Ramkumar on Feb 21, 2010
An heavenly poem. I enjoyed reading it.
Sharif Ishnin on Feb 21, 2010
Sweet piece.
T. S. Lewis on Feb 21, 2010
Great write and I loved the description
sambhafusia on Feb 21, 2010
good write.well done!
Starpisces on Feb 21, 2010
nice.. I must try to write something like that also, haha…
Kazuko Takamine on Feb 22, 2010
creatively written
albert1jemi on Feb 22, 2010
good choice of words

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