Blue Cavalry and Razor

Darla Cooke on Mar 19, 2011

A poem for Duff’s writing challenge using the words Blue Cavalry and Razor.

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I’m heading to Blue Cavalry,
with vengence on my mind.
You can try to hide from me,
but you I will surely find.

You had better watch out,
I know you stole my locket.
I’m coming armed and ready,
there’s a razor in my pocket.

It has a very sharp blade,
it will cut with one swipe.
That really annoying smirk,
from your face I can wipe.

If you really like your grin,
then return my locket to me.
I can be a sensible person,
as long as you don’t try to flee.

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Comments (7)

hfj on Mar 21, 2011
Out of all those i’ve read so far, we all seem to have a lot of the same ideas about these two words. Good flow with this poem Darla. I really liked this poem a lot. Well done.
Marie Milton on Mar 21, 2011
Once again your pen strikes will for Duffy’s Challenge …superb! well done!
elnavann on Mar 21, 2011
Sounds ominous – good challenge
Frederick Dewar on Mar 22, 2011
I like the usage of the rhyme in this one. Good work.
maranatha on Mar 23, 2011
short and to the point. I like this – probably because I have thought like this on occasion!
Rod Ferrandino on Mar 23, 2011
I like the matter-of-fact approach you take here.
Butterfly Musings on Mar 24, 2011
great poem for the challenge, awesome

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