Blue Ice

Shirley Shuler on Mar 4, 2010

Tags: blowing, blue, chilling, despair, emotional, ice unbroken, Illusions, killing, melting, moment, pillars, represent, Threatening, tossed, wallowing, wrapped

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Cold, unbroken…

Cold, unbroken pieces

All about your illusions

Standing before cold eyes

Giving nothing away

Pretending to be what you cannot be

Warm soul on ice

Wrapped in layers of shame

Wallowing in your own despair

Despising the face you represent

Pressure mounting, each moment is threatening

The pillars are tossed and blowing

Mind hanging in the balance

Raw, emotional feelings, chilling and killing

Blue ice, melting in the dark

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Comments (16)

pen2010 on Mar 4, 2010
good share
seema1962 on Mar 4, 2010
Very cool
ujwal28 on Mar 4, 2010
Nice share.
AlmaG on Mar 4, 2010
Souls that are once warm are now frozen. Excellent piece.
johnnydod on Mar 4, 2010
Great brilliant wonderful
swatilohani on Mar 4, 2010
so arresting friend
Michael Eboh on Mar 4, 2010
sound do lovely a post.
sara2010 on Mar 4, 2010
Nice sharing
sambhafusia on Mar 4, 2010
wonderful write…well done
Vo Nguyen on Mar 4, 2010
Wow deep, very deep.
Lady Sunshine on Mar 5, 2010
Chilling piece, Shirley. *shivers*
Ruby Hawk on Mar 5, 2010
A sad story.
devsir on Mar 6, 2010
I liked it
standingproud on Mar 8, 2010
Shirley this is awesome…
albert1jemi on Mar 8, 2010
beautiful poem
Melody SJAL on Mar 13, 2010
Lovely poem.

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