A poem under that magical moment once in a blue moon real love happens.

I sat under the stars at night.

surrounded by mountains and trees,

you held my hand and everything felt so right.

I was consumed with love and something came over me.

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I looked up to see the bright blue moon glimmering above.

For this precious, moment only happens once, to some.

And I knew this was no ordinary kind of love.

Bodies meshing into one, under a blue moon, kissing until dusk, was done.

T.S.Garp © Copyright 2010 All Rights Reserved.

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Comments (15)
  • joyhyena29 on Feb 4, 2010

    great post^^

  • pearl2010 on Feb 4, 2010

    awesome. The picture of the girl in this poem is so pretty and young.

  • Dame Barbara on Feb 4, 2010

    Very romantic!

  • AlmaG on Feb 4, 2010

    Very sweet and romantic :)

  • VTech on Feb 4, 2010

    Very nice

  • Jenilia12 on Feb 4, 2010

    Excellent piece !

  • wonder on Feb 5, 2010

    I’m swept into the composition. Great!

  • seema1962 on Feb 5, 2010

    nice piece :)

  • Lady Sunshine on Feb 5, 2010

    Lovely piece. The blue moon is magical – anything can happen.

  • lillyrose on Feb 5, 2010

    Beautiful poem, very visual and the picture fitted so perfectly!

  • albert1jemi on Feb 5, 2010

    good one

  • qasimdharamsy on Feb 7, 2010

    very nice one….

  • mkd1788 on Feb 7, 2010

    lovely piece..great pic you have uploaded..

  • Starpisces on Feb 8, 2010

    wow, romantic!
    :)

  • lily on Mar 8, 2011

    A very great poetry! So sweeeet & so romantic. Thanks for sharing, i love it & the picture very nice too. Yes, your right real love (or true love) happens once in a lifetime! For me, it’s the truest feeling that i ever had, a very great feeling, a real love, an unforgettable love. Taking much care of yourself always & God bless everyone.

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