Poem.

Gathered around the bird bath

six jolly gentlemen in blue waistcoats

one in, one out

one in, one out.

They never squabble, fight

or push one another about.

On chilly mornings they pierce the silver top

and sip away on cream

fat little chaps like lollipops.

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  • zain0077 on Nov 16, 2010

    Nice poem.

  • Larry Fish on Nov 16, 2010

    Wonderful poem, so beautiful.

  • suhail on Nov 16, 2010

    yep enjoyed the read , very well crafted

  • Raj the Tora on Nov 16, 2010

    very cute poetry. You brought about the reality of bird bath in front of my eyes.

  • Hendrik on Nov 17, 2010

    Good!

  • rivet32 on Nov 20, 2010

    beautiful poem! i have a fascination with birds :) )

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