Blue Tongue (Haiku)

Kristie Claar on Nov 4, 2011

Tags: blue, fun, Haiku, park

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Haiku, my new found love. It is simply enjoyable.

Look at my tongue mom

Crazy how bright blue it is

Fun times at the park

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Comments (31)

okkhattak on Nov 4, 2011
good one
Kristie Claar on Nov 4, 2011
Thank you for reading and commenting, okkhattak. Thank you also for helping me help the Klein family this month. God Bless.
Melody SJAL on Nov 4, 2011
Nice haiku.
Christina Noll on Nov 4, 2011
awww
girishpuri on Nov 5, 2011
interesting
Kristie Claar on Nov 5, 2011
Thank you Melody, Christina, and girishpuri for reading and commenting, God Bless!
sheilanewton on Nov 5, 2011
Hilarious!
beingwell on Nov 5, 2011
Fun poem!
freebird989 on Nov 6, 2011
wola!
FX777222999 on Nov 6, 2011
Sure funny time!
ittech on Nov 6, 2011
good one thanks for this
lxdollarsxl on Nov 6, 2011
enjoyable, children find so many things funny
Armiella on Nov 6, 2011
Cute!
Kristie Claar on Nov 7, 2011
Thank you all for reading and leaving such wonderful comments, God Bless!
vijayanths on Nov 7, 2011
That’s a good one.
lxdollarsxl on Nov 7, 2011
When will it turn green?
rgreenfield on Nov 7, 2011
fun!
Rayann Borman on Nov 8, 2011
Love and Prayers to the Klein family.
Yamin2011 on Nov 8, 2011
for the Klein family!
Kristie Claar on Nov 8, 2011
Thank you all for reading and commenting and helping me support the Klein family this month. God Bless!
ittech on Nov 8, 2011
nice thanks for this
realityspeaks on Nov 11, 2011
Enjoyable
paulc488 on Nov 11, 2011
Really cool picture
neopisiva on Nov 11, 2011
Haiku can make you say a lot with just a few words!
For the Kleins!
Martin Kloess on Nov 11, 2011
very good.
Kristie Claar on Nov 11, 2011
Thank you all for reading and commenting and helping me to help the Kleins this month, God Bless!
Marlyna Borman on Nov 14, 2011
My thoughts are with the Klein family.
Kristie Claar on Nov 15, 2011
Thank you all so very much, God Bless!
Sheldon Claar on Nov 17, 2011
My thoughts are with the Klein family.
beingwell on Nov 18, 2011
Visiting for the second time.
Kristie Claar on Nov 18, 2011
Thank you all for reading and commenting. Thank you all for helping me to help the Klein family. God Bless all of you.

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