His lips were so sweet…

White Rose of Sharon
Softly kissed by gentle lips
Becomes a red bloom

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  • papaleng on Sep 4, 2009

    a very sweet Haiku!

  • ken bultman on Sep 4, 2009

    I miss this plant from back home although it is related to the hibiscus. Your haiku was wonderful.

  • Jane Jane on Sep 4, 2009

    nice haiku..^^

  • agriculi on Sep 4, 2009

    Nice and sweet.

  • Jenny Heart on Sep 4, 2009

    Beautifully put! Love it!

  • Christine Ramsay on Sep 4, 2009

    A beautiful haiku to match the beautiful picture.

    Christine

  • Darla Cooke on Sep 4, 2009

    Beautiful haiku and pic!

  • maranatha on Sep 4, 2009

    Not what I expected! Beautiful.

  • Lostash on Sep 4, 2009

    Simple…beautiful.

  • Shirley Shuler on Sep 4, 2009

    Hi Lady Sunshine, absolutely beautiful!!

  • giftarist on Sep 5, 2009

    Nice image and nice haiku!

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