Bomb Blast (Senryu Verse)

Priyanka Bhowmick on Nov 16, 2009

Tags: bomb blast, human nature, Japanese, Life, senryu

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Senryu- 5-7-5 syllables based on human nature. This Senryu contains the effect after a bomb blast.

a bomb blast a day,

ten lives destroyed, shattering,

the lives of thousands.

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wonder on Nov 16, 2009
Simple sounding, but—-
thundering in disguise.
Sunitha Stalin on Nov 16, 2009
good one……
drelayaraja on Nov 16, 2009
Sounds good.
svishnugopal on Nov 16, 2009
wonderfully written..it shows out all emotions
Sue Nuckles on Nov 16, 2009
Well that sounds like a bad day.

Good writing!
TroostAvenue on Nov 16, 2009
Elegant.
Themax on Nov 16, 2009
sounds very bad day,so sad!
Goodselfme on Nov 16, 2009
Vividly depicted, yet a sad imagery. Well penned piece.
Pinaki Ghosh on Nov 16, 2009
good 1
Prometheus Ridley Scott on Nov 16, 2009
very good
deep blue on Nov 17, 2009
Really earth shaking.

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