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Bomb

Christian M Archer on Nov 1, 2008
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About a bomb’s destructive power.

Obliteration
dancing dust
twirls in the gust
sandstorms the ground
Saturation
booming blast
consumes the last
surcease of sound
Devastation
grand collapse
implosion claps
the night apart
Reparation
concrete fills
the hollowed hills
a brand new start.

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Comments (4)
  • Jared on Nov 1, 2008

    Really good, I liked it!

  • andrea on Nov 2, 2008

    nice work. i liked it as well.

  • Lynn Gunter Harper on Nov 4, 2008

    LOVED IT! I could see the bomb’s destruction in motion through your words.

  • trishia on Dec 31, 2008

    This style is amazing. It flows very well as it is just to the point!

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