I found another one of my poems, but it was incomplete.

So I completed it, and now here it is, my second poem. Dedicated to all those who took a different path in life, a different choice(a tail) but suffered extreme despair due to the initial sufferings or opposition faced by them.

Hope you like it :)

Born with a tail and set up to fail,

I wandered off the path, didn’t leave a trail.

Abandoned by all and ready to fall,

Bouncing alone like a crazy ball.

Rambling around in a dingy hall,

Filled with all the grief, the hatred and all.

No love, no lust,

But trust is a must.

Trust shall I whom,

My mind is full of rust.

Not even my heart, my soul is no longer mine,

My conscience now twisted like a grapewine.

I don’t know whom to believe,

My mind, my own soul, how do I retrieve?

And in all the dreams that I did weave,

There’s nothing now that I can achieve!

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  • Michael Degenhardt on Apr 26, 2011

    Aside for one spelling error I saw, I liked the rhyme and the clear imagery in this, used to convey the sentiment. Really nice work!

  • S.K on Apr 27, 2011

    thnx :)

    but which spelling mistake?? could you please point it out??

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