Haiku- three lines each of 5-7-5 syllables.

Air conditioners,

makes room cooler, chills out mind,

the more bill you pay.

No labour needed,

wash clothes in washing machine,

shortage in water.

High resolution,

good picture quality, makes,

you wear power lens

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Comments (6)
  • Hansika on Nov 10, 2009

    nice one

  • Teves on Nov 10, 2009

    Good one…

  • Jenny Heart on Nov 10, 2009

    Great!

  • Steven West on Nov 11, 2009

    Very well done.

  • wonder on Nov 11, 2009

    Yes that’s it.

  • Nikita K on Nov 12, 2009

    Not your most conventional haiku but incredibly enjoyable to read!

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