Humour series. Haiku each 5-7-5 syllables.

Clothes washing powder,

clean your clothes, make them whiter,

soft hands turn rougher.

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Soft drinks, quenches thirst,

soul moves on trip to heaven,

body trapped by fats.

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Dandruff free shampoos,

makes hair soft, silky, more shine,

expert in hairfalls.

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  • wonder on Nov 14, 2009

    Keep cracking at your wisdom, we need it.

  • drelayaraja on Nov 14, 2009

    wonderful series. very nice to read in between those lines.

  • Teves on Nov 14, 2009

    Nice poem…

  • girlnextdoor on Nov 14, 2009

    I love haikus but cannot write them. Hope to try my hand at them. Thanks for sharing…

  • goindia on Nov 14, 2009

    ha ha ha !!

    i liked it…

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  • Sukhdarshan on Nov 14, 2009

    I don’t know anything about Haiku, but It was wonderful to read…thanks…all the best…

  • Goodselfme on Nov 14, 2009

    Good trio. TX

  • RAJEEV BHARGAVA on Jan 1, 2010

    i really enjoyed reading this HAIKU poem. there is so much wisdom in your words that i want to sit and listen all the time. a really lovely and very realistic true-to-life poem.

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