Bravery (A Haiku)

Jerry Bradford aka Jerry Atrixx on Apr 28, 2011

Tags: bravery, change, courage, growth, loneliness, love, rememdy

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Courage is not the absence of fear, but rather the judgement that something else is more important than fear. ~Ambrose Redmoon.

She misses his voice

And tells him she wants to change

But change takes courage

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CHIPMUNK on Apr 28, 2011
great work like it
The Real Poet on Apr 28, 2011
Masterpiece…simplistically stylish my friend.
T. S. Lewis on Apr 28, 2011
Hope it makes her move in a direction instead of sitting still.
Jerry Bradford aka Jerry Atrixx on Apr 28, 2011
Thanks CHipmunk for your comments.
Jerry Bradford aka Jerry Atrixx on Apr 28, 2011
Thank you everyone for commenting.
real lady on May 6, 2011
Hi Jerry, this is the right haiku. simply beautiful.

“@ Jerry Atrixx Thanks for the reminder. This is actually my second attempt to make haiku. I know that actually, but still struggling to find correct words. Hope I can improve after several tries. I appreciate the comment, really. That’s what I need.

Read more: http://authspot.com/poetry/acts-of-prayer/#ixzz1LZNN1P00 “
Jerry Bradford aka Jerry Atrixx on May 6, 2011
Thank you Real Lady and you are welcome.
Darlene20 on May 11, 2011
Lovely haiku.

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