Break-down in Communication

diamondpoet on Nov 20, 2009

Tags: communicating, friendship, love, Relationships

Sometime people grow and desire different friends, instead of simply saying just that they create conflict every time you see them. This might be the time to have a funeral and say good-bye to this relationship.

If words you heard causes you to cease,

and as of today, we no longer speak.

Mis-communication starting to cause unwanted grief.

Unsettled minds deprived of much needed peace.

Then I think this relationship need a burial reef.

REST IN PEACE!!!!!!!!!!!!

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drelayaraja on Nov 20, 2009
RIP
diamondpoet on Nov 20, 2009
I don’t live my life to have constant bickering.
Darla Cooke on Nov 20, 2009
Nice poem.
T.Rex McGoogle on Nov 20, 2009
Nice poem. A bad relationship is a pain in the sacroiliac.
ashan1614 on Nov 20, 2009
So true. Shake the dust off your feet and move on.
Prometheus Ridley Scott on Nov 20, 2009
nice poem
Rated PG13 on Nov 20, 2009
Brief and sincere.
Love your work.
Snooky on Nov 20, 2009
LOL, O.K. Annie Oakley You hit the target dead center.
Themax on Nov 20, 2009
ha ha RIP! I am going to sleep
very nice poem
Mike1229 on Nov 20, 2009
thumbs up!
TroostAvenue on Nov 20, 2009
Pretty drastic move.
T. S. Lewis on Nov 20, 2009
Bury it and move one. Great words of wisdom
Miguel Aviles author of The Zerkian Chronicles on Nov 20, 2009
Simply well thought out.
mkd1788 on Nov 21, 2009
great theme…. thanks for sharing
Videomark on Nov 21, 2009
Sometimes this is true.
Hansika on Nov 21, 2009
very nice one…thanks for the share
Frances Lawrence on Nov 21, 2009
An interesting and original poem. Sometimes it is necessary to accept that we have grown apart.
Jane Jane on Nov 21, 2009
interesting.
cutedrishti8 on Nov 21, 2009
Great piece of write…
prettybre on Nov 21, 2009
that is cool how you word each sentence
katelove on Nov 23, 2009
I like your brief intro( description) and the short but to the point poem. There lies deep problems underneath the miscommunication.
PhoenixRox on Nov 25, 2009
I loved this poem, and have been in that situation a few times myself. I agree with you.Any kind of relation is a 2 way street.If it becomes a 1-way, there is no relation anymore.Great work!

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