Break Up

ashleycollier on Jun 19, 2009

Broke up with my girlfriend. been vey hard and I feel horrible for leaving her but I had to do it.

I never wanted to hurt you

that’s why I kept it in,

but it made me really ill

and it burnt under my skin.

You could never make me happy

sorry to have wasted all of your time,

we’ve been apart for just two weeks

and I already feel fine.

It’s really not your fault

we’re just cut from different cloths,

when we’re apart we felt together,

when together i felt lost.

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Comments (18)

Darla Smith on Jun 19, 2009
Sometimes ending a relationship is all you can do to be happy.
Rose Christine on Jun 19, 2009
Nice poem
Katien on Jun 19, 2009
Good poem. It sounds like you made the right decision.
Will Dee on Jun 19, 2009
I love your message. It hard to more on sometimes.
Sheila M on Jun 19, 2009
Sounds like it was for the best~
Kate Smedley on Jun 19, 2009
Thanks for sharing something so difficult, the last two lines show that it is the right thing to do.
STEVE666 on Jun 19, 2009
Honest piece.
Ruby Hawk on Jun 19, 2009
it happens that way.
Liane Schmidt on Jun 20, 2009
This is beautiful and heartbreaking*

Blessings.

Sincerely,

-Liane Schmidt.
revivor on Jun 23, 2009
great flow – the final part is lovely writing
you maintain a very tidy, tight rhythm all the way through
probably best out of it too!!
Sandra A Flowers on Jun 23, 2009
great expression here, nice job
hollynoel001 on Jun 23, 2009
been there felt that !!
Juancav on Jun 23, 2009
The end.
The Quail on Jun 24, 2009
Great writing here packed full of emotions. We must also remember too, that all things happen for a reason and never by chance.
California Dreamer on Jun 24, 2009
Very meaningful poem, sometimes it does take for us to say goodbye, for ourselves own peace to say hello. Nicely done.
Glassie on Jun 26, 2009
Sad Theme – Nice Work
clafleur on Jul 30, 2009
Good job. you are a good poet.
spiritwalker on Aug 7, 2009
good work…very emotionally ripping.

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