A final break-up.

Her wedding rings were gone

from her fingers,

what went wrong?

He found them on a velvet pincushion,

on top of the dresser,

circled around a straight pin,

his eyes grew thin,

those rings he would touch,

to her they meant so much,

gently he would choke back tears,

clear his throat with a small cough,

then he twisted his gold band off,

placed it on top her rings,

the past whispers in his ears,

as sadness sings.

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Comments (4)
  • cutedrishti8 on Nov 8, 2009

    sad one

  • Sourav on Nov 8, 2009

    Very emotiona write. Nice one.

  • Shamanz on Nov 9, 2009

    sad, emotional but overall – very well written. Love the picture you chose that went with it.

  • Hansika on Nov 9, 2009

    excellant article….thanks!!

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