Breath in Deeply

Milton H Peebles III on May 22, 2010

I just let my mind flow and this was produced.

Breath in Deeply

22 May 10

I trip my way along

Landing in the clovers

Breath in deeply

Searching the skies

The clouds run away

I capture one anyway

The cloud carries me along

A dreamland of whimsy

Breath in deeply

The rope snaps

Down I fall

A cave opens up

Dark and cold and falling

Creepy tried to scare

Breath in deeply

Adventure begins

Imagination roars madly

Now to rip up this blank page

More of my Whimsy:

* Little Ki

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Comments (6)

Brenda Nelson on May 22, 2010
Nice flow of thought….
Christine Ramsay on May 22, 2010
A great description of your feelings . Well done.

Christine
Daisy Peasblossom on May 22, 2010
Well written. Perhaps you should go with that free thought stream more often.
Joie Schmidt on May 22, 2010
Very nice work*

Blessings.

Sincerely,

-Liane Schmidt.
IspellBad on May 23, 2010
Very cool!
Palestrya on Jan 13, 2011
Nice one. I like to watch clouds and day dream . . .

Hi there!