Escape, Suffocation, Leaving, Invisibility.

If I could just get out of here.

Floating through the clouds in the air.

I’m locked up tight, can’t breath.

I have to leave.

Leave me alone.

On my own.

Take me some place I can call home.

Feels like I am suffocating.

I m tired of waiting.

Every day anticipating.

How much longer will it be.

Before my spirit can soar free.

Can’t pretend.

This has to end.

I don’t think I can last.

I am disappearing fast.

Listen to me.

Let me be.

Can’t you see.

Feeling constantly up a tree.

Will not vanish.

Can’t be banished.

Must break out soon.

Find an abandoned room.

So much gloom.

I m in tombed.

Squeezing me tight.

Miss the light.

Out of sight.

I must be let go.

Emotions start to flow.

I must find some release.

Always facing so much grief.

Release me, hurry make it brief.

Oh thank you, this is relief.

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Comments (5)
  • Darla Cooke on Sep 24, 2009

    Interesting poem.

  • LOVELYHONEY on Sep 24, 2009

    just excellent poetry

    i am also a fast/speed poet poet

    but not as fast as you

    i have only written1160 poems

    since Jan 2009 on Triond

    have u read some pl do

  • T.Rex McGoogle on Sep 24, 2009

    Your poetry is written well though on the dark side. I think you are a very bright person obviously. You have a lot to give.

  • ashan1614 on Sep 25, 2009

    Stop waiting for someone to release you. Sometimes you have to break out!

  • Francy on Sep 25, 2009

    lovely done my friend
    Keep it up

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