Breathtaking

T. S. Lewis on Mar 11, 2011

For Tony and Helen Savage, my late in laws. The older your daughter gets the more lovely she becomes.

Lovely next to beauty is where I find you,

In the middle of astonishing

My breathtaking view

I could search the world over

And not find a more spectacular scene

In your arms is where I find my dreams

It may sound cliché but sometimes

The best phrases can’t be rearranged

Next to you is where I want to reside

Watching your beauty change

As our love remains the same

7
Liked it

Comments (8)

Cracked Gamer on Mar 11, 2011
thanks
Publ1zher on Mar 11, 2011
Great share
Jerry Bradford aka Jerry Atrixx on Mar 12, 2011
BRAVO!!!!!!
FX777222999 on Mar 12, 2011
Beautiful poem structure with imagery.
lillyrose on Mar 12, 2011
so beautifully put!
Darla Cooke on Mar 12, 2011
Lovely poem!
Ruby Hawk on Mar 12, 2011
A beautiful tribute to your wife, She’s a lucky woman.
Noisy Cricket on Mar 17, 2011
This is so beautiful, I know your wife is proud of you because I am and I’m just a fellow North Carolinian. Hope its ok, I added you as a friend. You know how that goes in the NC, were all one big happy family, at least they are in my hood. Thanks for sharing.

Hi there!