Molasses and sugar are sweet, but passing through a factory that manufactures it can be nauseating and sickening indeed.

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Sweet Seduction!

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Unmistaken smell…

Molasses factory’s near,

Jaggery can stink!

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Sweet or Sick!

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Sugar may be sweet

But not its making process.

Diabetic’s lucky!

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  • Jimmy Shilaho on Jun 5, 2011

    Did you mean jiggery or jaggery. I am not sure about the first one but find these pieces very true.

  • Raj the Tora on Jun 5, 2011

    As you rightly said, It is jaggery and have fixed it. Jaggery factory stinks for about a mile.

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