What web binds two couples together?

Recall when couple kissing there was we
Where did they go those flowers of our youth
A breeze of dreams still whispering the truth
That from that kiss would flow our destiny
You see that couple cuddling over there
What comfort care can see us one day them
Oh breeze of dreams where did such true love stem
That from this kiss their fate we too may share
Oh gentle flowers caught in breeze of dreams
Two couples drifting to a distant time
And in between a lifetime so sublime
That from a kiss imagination streams
And breeze of dreams has so much more to say
The couple that they’re watching are both they

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  • jennifer eiffel01 on Jul 30, 2012


  • Nxwtypx on Jul 30, 2012

    I’m not sure to read this as being about hope or envy?

  • lauralu on Jul 30, 2012

    Good share thanks

  • Jswana on Jul 30, 2012

    It makes me look back at the way this scenario made me feel as if we would be in an endless paradise when looking at how a younger pair is reacting to each other. It’s beautiful either way for evoking such thoughts! :)

  • Kharla Jolly on Jul 30, 2012

    A lovely picture of a life-long love affair. Very nice poem full of romance Thankyou for sharing it, Martin

  • sabanawaz on Jul 31, 2012

    lovely poem

  • Stessily on Jul 31, 2012

    Martin, Charming with nice imagery.
    Appreciatively, Stessily

  • Lynn Hollis on Jul 31, 2012

    Nice to have someone to share life’s dreams – those already written and those to come.

  • Kristie Claar on Aug 2, 2012

    Love this piece!

  • Neb Radzif on Aug 24, 2012

    “A breeze of dreams still whispering the truth”

    I love that. Uplifted my spirit a bit right there. Thank you for this.

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