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Brighten Up My World Again

Darla Cooke on Nov 2, 2009
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Bring back the sun.

 

I eagerly waited for your arrival,

refusing to end our special connection.

I remembered our times alone together,

savoring each and every precious moment.

I carried your memory within my heart,

while trying to avoid the sad tears.

Please brighten up my world again,

bring the sun back into my life.

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Comments (11)
  • ken bultman on Nov 2, 2009

    You are my sunshine.

  • alc on Nov 2, 2009

    Great write!

  • neet on Nov 2, 2009

    You are gud at expressing ……….anyone who reads it will feel the longing……..

  • ReggieLutz on Nov 2, 2009

    bittersweet – nice

  • STEVE666 on Nov 2, 2009

    Well the last line rings true with me at present—I’m freezing here!

  • Themax on Nov 2, 2009

    Beautiful just Beautiful :) thanks!!!
    Added as friend!!!

  • diamondpoet on Nov 2, 2009

    That was so beautiful, nice write.

  • Tanya Wallace on Nov 2, 2009

    Wonderfully expressed poem having so much feeling in it from happiness from the memories to sorrow at the loss.Good stuff!

  • giftarist on Nov 3, 2009

    Interesting read!

  • Starpisces on Nov 6, 2009

    A sad but nice poem

  • CutestPrincess on Nov 20, 2009

    Nicely done! I love the feeling in this one.

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