Broken

Lilliana F on Jul 23, 2011

Tags: arts, battered, beaten, broken, bruised, hurt, loveless, poem, Poetry

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Poem.

Tears roll down a battered face

Salt stings the open wounds

A broken girl lies on the ground

No hope. No love. No escape.

Betrayed. Battered. Beaten.

No love for she whose broken

And no one stops to lend a hand

No kind words ever spoken.

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sheilanewton on Jul 29, 2011
Love this poem, Katie. It almost broke my heart.
What a heartfelt read this is – you’re a talented poet, girl.
PruandMe on Jul 29, 2011
perfect imagery – and such a true statement on our society – so sad
Gerard Galvestini on Oct 1, 2011
Why won’t anyone help the girl?

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