Broken

dataoutsourcing on Oct 30, 2009

Tags: broken, love, poem, Short Poem

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A Short Poem.

Broken hearts, love’s dishonesty,

pieces collapse down to my feet.

Broken promises, love’s a lie,

puddles form from tears I cry.

Broken dreams, love’s daydream,

sorrowed cause of your invasion.

Broken optimism, love’s a game,

doesn’t last, ends the same.

Broken life, love is vanished,

Broken now and that’s the cost.

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Comments (16)

martinpm on Oct 31, 2009
Great poem enjoyed reading it.
Themax on Nov 3, 2009
Very nice poetry thanks
Aiyanna on Nov 3, 2009
Can feel the emotion in this poem…
neet on Nov 3, 2009
Nice piece……
PhoenixRox on Nov 3, 2009
May be a short poem, but it’s extremely powerful. Great piece.!
Snooky on Nov 4, 2009
sounds like on this here occasion
judging from your nice narration
something dear
some how got lost
Nice one Boss
spiritwalker on Nov 13, 2009
We all feel broken, we have to know how to put the peices back together.
Alexiandria M Michaels on Nov 14, 2009
sending you some hugs..
Liz Sapphire on Nov 21, 2009
Great words… thanks for sharing
mkd1788 on Dec 30, 2009
greatly expressed…great work
seema1962 on Feb 2, 2010
very emotional
Alive11 on Mar 22, 2010
Very Impressive write
Tulan on Jun 11, 2010
Love is fickle.
aman259 on Jul 12, 2010
Great knowledgeable stuff
drelayaraja on Jul 31, 2010
This is a touching poem. Very emotional indeed.
webseowriters on Aug 5, 2010
Very interesting post

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