My heart curses you.

My heart is broken as I cry over you; I cherished the love that I thought was so true. You have lied to my face, and you did it so quick. Now the thoughts I have they make me sick. Why did I believe the lies that you told? You promised me that together we would grow old. I should have known from your past, that  you and I could never have last. I learned that passion without trust will only breed total disgust. You like the attention while running your face, not realizing that you’ve hurt me so deeply and caused me total disgrace. My heart is wounded and it weeps salty tears, as I travel along with uncertainty and fear. My heart is broken and it’s broken real bad, that I curse the memories… of you that I have.

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  • Tracy on Sep 16, 2009

    I liked it very much.

  • Jaguar on Sep 16, 2009

    Very well written, even thou as a man we seldom admit when our hearts are broken.

  • BRANDY WALKER on Nov 7, 2009

    I FELT THE EMOTIONS OF THE WRITER…I ENJOYED THE HONESTY OF THE PIECE.

  • Lady Dukey on Nov 8, 2009

    Very well written.

  • Snuggles85 on Dec 3, 2009

    I really enjoyed this piece very good work indeed.
    :)

  • Lady Fantasy on Apr 26, 2010

    Been there, did that and don’t want to do it again.Lessons was learned the first time around here.A great honest piece to read
    and liked it.

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