Sad poem about a man with a broken heart.

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Wilting rose

Shattered romance

Broken heart

Never mends

Wounded dove

Crushed love

Lips forever

Shall remain unkissed

Bonds that are shattered

Destroys your happiness

Why pretend?

But life goes on

So you must move on

My sentimental friend

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  • raman13 on Feb 26, 2010

    Brilliant Write

    Best Regards.

  • Darla Cooke on Feb 26, 2010

    Very touching.

  • Christine Ramsay on Feb 26, 2010

    A beautifully expressed piece.

    Christine

  • 8Shei8 on Feb 26, 2010

    an emotional and beautiful write

  • Joie Schmidt on Feb 28, 2010

    Beautiful*

    Blessings.

    Sincerely,

    -Liane Schmidt.

  • hfj on Mar 1, 2010

    Nice poem Steve. Something different coming from you. Well done.

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