Broken Heart

isloooboy on Jul 1, 2011

Tags: betrayed, broken heart, love, poem, Poetry

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Broken Heart.

How can I explain

A heart full of pain

nothing but a toy

which you can destroy

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Comments (35)

reiny on Jul 1, 2011
what a simple but deeply …
Saurav Banerjee on Jul 1, 2011
I feel sorry for that. But cheer up and see life on a positive note! All the best…
Rosettaartist1 on Jul 1, 2011
Yes.. cheer up.
amrubhai on Jul 1, 2011
Visite back to my article thanks
Sebastian Onciu on Jul 1, 2011
How simple,and yet how intense!
chandrra on Jul 1, 2011
Short n sweet. Well expressed
aheed411 on Jul 1, 2011
Sad
LTStajul on Jul 1, 2011
SAD! and well impressed
Dennis N OBrien on Jul 1, 2011
Well done.
lapasan on Jul 1, 2011
Nice poem.
wonder on Jul 1, 2011
This is really creative.
megamatt09 on Jul 1, 2011
Simple but good.
jaidadiz on Jul 1, 2011
Great poem.. Deep
erwinkennythomas on Jul 1, 2011
Profound!
gaby7 on Jul 1, 2011
A sweet three-liner here boy!
cterrell on Jul 1, 2011
very simple and deep
Lynn Proctor on Jul 1, 2011
Broken hearts help us grow and become wiser. We all take the same trip, sooner or later, and often many times. Be of good cheer. There is much to be grateful for.
Linda Lori on Jul 1, 2011
Well put!
Ebbin Jose on Jul 1, 2011
Move on buddy. There is no time for moodiness.
onestep234 on Jul 1, 2011
simply is the best
Cyni1106 on Jul 1, 2011
First, I love the pic. It’s a perfect match to the sentiment in the poem. Good job. Hope your heart heals. Keep smiling.
ittech on Jul 1, 2011
at first i think this would be a poem but it is short and precise and well visible abosultely wonderful
Goodselfme on Jul 1, 2011
It is through the broken heart that one can actually be a stronger person. It seems sometimes that the awful feelings linger forever, but the fact is that healing comes.Poetry can truly be a form of journaling which is beneficial to getting to feel better.
sambasivarao on Jul 2, 2011
That’s why I will not give my heart to any body without fevi stick.
Starpisces on Jul 3, 2011
a short but touching poem, hope the broken heart can be back to whole piece soon.
bolive on Jul 3, 2011
great work
yes me on Jul 3, 2011
short sweet to the point cheers
DAN MCHARDY on Jul 3, 2011
Brilliant but I think it was a little bit short… Maybe you could have another verse?
Peace Poet on Jul 3, 2011
These four lines are very intense. This is really a spontaneous expression of powerful emotion.
pandabear on Jul 3, 2011
I really like it. Very thought provoking for just four lines!
underyourskin on Jul 4, 2011
4 lines that make you wonder is the writer in extreme pain
Judy Sheldon on Jul 4, 2011
simple, profound and elegant
TS Orion on Jul 5, 2011
concise and well said.
novelist on Jul 5, 2011
Your short poem reflects your feelings.
Raj the Tora on Jul 25, 2011
Sorry for whatever happened, but heart is not a toy at all! Cheer up. life is calling.

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