Broken Hearted

diamondpoet on Nov 12, 2009

When your in love and someone suddenly stops loving you, they have stolen the best part of you.

What I gave to you,

I did unselfishly.

I find it a little comical.

That I was so childishly,

in love with you.

But I now resent every

entrusting you with my heart.

You have destroyed,

the best part of me.

So now I depart to find,

someone who will help me,

reestablish what has been taken away.

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Comments (12)

LoveDoctor on Nov 12, 2009
Great one! Don’t ever let them see you sweat. Love yourself is the key and become the best you can be and then one day they will realize what they lost. And that is sweet revenge my friend.
cutedrishti8 on Nov 12, 2009
Great poem…First line is very touching one…
Eunice Tan on Nov 12, 2009
Well said
Teves on Nov 12, 2009
I’m also a broken heart. My Girlfriend leave me! He had a new Boyfriend! It’s very sad!
Hansika on Nov 12, 2009
i love it…thanks for the share
drelayaraja on Nov 12, 2009
Nice poem. Well said.
ashan1614 on Nov 12, 2009
Must agree with sunshine. When you go on with your life with confidence, the one who left you will regret their decision.
Joie Schmidt on Nov 13, 2009
Heartache is never easy…

Blessings.

Sincerely,

-Liane Schmidt.
Jane Jane on Nov 13, 2009
that’s reality. with love comes broken hearts unless he’s the one.
diamondpoet on Nov 13, 2009
That for all the response I have received for this poem. Triond friends forever.
Darla Cooke on Nov 13, 2009
Very touching!
chitragopi on Nov 13, 2009
Very nice indeed.

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