Broken Heart’s Whisper Haiku

Jandi Perez on Mar 17, 2011

Tags: broken, dies, good-byes, heart, oblivion, please

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Pleading to your heart…

Oblivion lies

In the broken heart, all dies

Please no more good byes

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Comments (4)

Nancy E. on Mar 20, 2011
This is AMAZING!
Shauny Marson (Jandi's Brother) on Mar 29, 2011
Wow dude. I’ma be real I can’t do Haiku lol…but this man is amazing stuff :]
Gaby on May 24, 2011
Short and sweet!:D but damn really emotional!<3
Marco Polo on Aug 16, 2011
This is short but has a huge meaning.. awesome man

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