Its a poem about a heart made out of clay which symbolized our love but suddenly it broke when our relationship was over.

We drew a piece of art which has been created into a clay model.
This piece of art was you and me with our own love heart.
We treasured it into our own homes, smiling upon every glimpse.
However, situations changed you
and this love had suddenly gone.
It angered me to see you behave in such a cruel way which resulted
In breaking what was ours.
The love heart that broke to pieces.

Please read more of my poems:

The Sunset

A New Beginning

Love Will Find a Way

Many Years Later

Blood Tears

Our Eyes Have Met Since So Long

Best Friends

Do You Love Me?

Make Me Believe

Dear Love

Near Flight to Heaven

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  • Darlene McFarlane on Dec 4, 2008

    Shafi, it is always sad when someone we love and plan to spend the rest of our lives with lets us down. You have conveyed your feeling well and I wish you the very best.

    God bless,
    Darlene

  • Liane Schmidt on Dec 4, 2008

    Beautiful poem!

    Blessings.

    Sincerely,

    -Liane Schmidt.

  • eddiego65 on Dec 6, 2008

    Beautiful sad poem! Well, that\’s life!

  • Virginia Wolfe on Dec 14, 2008

    i nursed a pathetic little poinsettia the first year my boyfriend were together. it was the first plant i tried to grow in “our house” i’ve had it for 3 years now. its not gonna make it through this winter. makes me sad that my plant is gonna die. i have used it as a symbol of how long my relationship has lasted.

    nice poem

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