Broken Paradise Between Us

ShadowPsychos on Oct 28, 2010

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Something in me has changed

my hands altered with the times

and you’re here with me

but you are not…

…not by my side

you wash over me in ways

that strip away my sanity

yet you are as real to me

as the corpses within the earth

the stars above our head

are in awe of all we have

cause we can walk places

beyond every ones wildest dreams

all our worlds are sewn together

a tapestry of broken fields and time combined

but our skies have vultures on the wind

bleeding underneath their wings

and the seas are filled with abominations

because that is the only way

we know how to feel

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Comments (16)

1Mind on Oct 28, 2010
I enjoyed this. Thanks!
Jerry Bradford aka Jerry Atrixx on Oct 28, 2010
dark but entrancing.
drelayaraja on Oct 28, 2010
Very nice poetry…
Christine Ramsay on Oct 28, 2010
A dark and beautifully written piece.

Christine
Ranjan Mathews on Oct 28, 2010
Let the carrion vultures
Get good living cultures
And soar into the sky
Like Angels flying high.
Ubel Ein on Oct 28, 2010
Mesmerizing!
Noeal V on Oct 28, 2010
Nice Share.
Lord Banks on Oct 28, 2010
Your getting better and better M, good work. David
pattiann on Oct 28, 2010
Great poem. I agree with Lord Banks, you are getting better.
Rehoboth on Oct 28, 2010
$ nice post $
Kaye TM on Oct 28, 2010
what a fun read!
LoveDoctor on Oct 28, 2010
Awesome poetry. love the title.
Tattoo3658we on Oct 28, 2010
Wonderful Poem
suhail on Oct 31, 2010
i think i am in love with you and your work !!! if i had half your talent I would have lit the world on fire and watch the KABOOM!
TommyP on Nov 3, 2010
I believe this… “all our worlds are sewn together…” Nice imagery and phrase!
quiet voice on Nov 8, 2010
…Deep. Take care.

Hi there!