Death is inevitable. The surest way to fight it is to be prepared how to face it and win against it.

I’m so afraid
To be dead,
I love to live –
A life that’s continuous
And be permitted
Not to show all its content
Even after its expiration.
~
If death knocks,
I will strike the door
With every loud laugh –
I will never give in
To that crazy destroyer,
I will stop it with all my might,
And throw it to the lake of fire.

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  • drelayaraja on Feb 2, 2010

    Wonderful……..

  • diamondpoet on Feb 2, 2010

    If thing were really that simple, nice write.

  • Darla Cooke on Feb 2, 2010

    Very good poem!

  • Guy Hogan on Feb 2, 2010

    Ah, no one wins over death. There’s no sense in fighting it. It always wins.

  • Shirley Shuler on Feb 2, 2010

    If only things were that simple, gift. Well done.

  • 8Shei8 on Feb 2, 2010

    Death is inevitable. Well write :)

  • Lady Sunshine on Feb 2, 2010

    Nice one…but death will eventually come.

  • Liz Sapphire on Feb 2, 2010

    Great poem… although we know that death is inevitable, we must do everything in our power to enjoy life as we know it. =) Thanks for the wonderful share.

  • meandu on Feb 2, 2010

    Nice writing. It is unfortunate that for us the only sure thing we know is that death will eventually come for us.

  • meandu on Feb 2, 2010

    Nice writing. Unfortunately death will win out over us in the end.

  • standingproud on Feb 2, 2010

    I like this poem.
    I’m not afraid of death I’m afraid of life.

  • CA Johnson on Feb 2, 2010

    This is very interesting. You should never give up fighitng. Thanks for sharing. I used to be afraid of dying, but I have come to terms with the fact that it will happen whether I want it to or not.

  • Ruby Hawk on Feb 2, 2010

    That’s right, strive on your hardest till the very end of he road and you will be ready to go peacefully.

  • Val Mills on Feb 3, 2010

    I hope to die gracefully.

  • Inna Tysoe on Feb 3, 2010

    good one

  • Frances Lawrence on Feb 3, 2010

    Death will come sooner or later, the time is not ours to choose. Don’t fight against death, live well and live each day fully. In the end you will see that what matters most is quality of life not quantity.

  • Buma on Feb 3, 2010

    Beautiful

  • albert1jemi on Feb 3, 2010

    beautiful share

  • qasimdharamsy on Feb 3, 2010

    a very lovely one….

  • alensmith on Feb 3, 2010

    nice poem

  • albert1jemi on Feb 3, 2010

    excellent share

  • alensmith on Feb 3, 2010

    great and very meaning full thanks for sharing it

  • CHAN LEE PENG on Feb 3, 2010

    One should face it with courage.

  • sambhafusia on Feb 3, 2010

    nice idea…great share..

  • krishnakanta on Feb 3, 2010

    very interesting to read

  • Jane Jane on Feb 3, 2010

    I’m more afraid of the death of a loved one.

  • Pablina on Feb 3, 2010

    There is no need to be afraid of death, as long as you have had a fulfilled life. :)

  • lillyrose on Feb 3, 2010

    your challenge was so well written! loved it.

  • AlmaG on Feb 3, 2010

    Lovely poem … Giftarist pala kala ko artist anyway GA for short ;)

  • PR Mace on Feb 7, 2010

    Very meaningful verses.

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