Comments on: Broken Switch http://authspot.com/poetry/broken-switch/ Thu, 16 Feb 2012 00:41:41 -0500 http://wordpress.org/?v=2.8.4 hourly 1 By: Elleword http://authspot.com/poetry/broken-switch/comment-page-1/#comment-944163 Elleword Sat, 03 Oct 2009 11:26:15 +0000 http://authspot.com/poetry/broken-switch/#comment-944163 This was an interesting change of pace Brad..a brilliant rant against being blind? Being blind is not a disability.. it is just another way of "looking" at the world :-) This was an interesting change of pace Brad..a brilliant rant against being blind? Being blind is not a disability.. it is just another way of “looking” at the world :-)

]]> By: Tlchimes http://authspot.com/poetry/broken-switch/comment-page-1/#comment-919323 Tlchimes Fri, 11 Sep 2009 12:02:59 +0000 http://authspot.com/poetry/broken-switch/#comment-919323 You struck a powerful cord.... well done. Um... people argue over who is THE troll of Triond? Wow. Learn something new about people everyday. You struck a powerful cord…. well done.

Um… people argue over who is THE troll of Triond? Wow. Learn something new about people everyday.

]]> By: cafftee http://authspot.com/poetry/broken-switch/comment-page-1/#comment-919287 cafftee Fri, 11 Sep 2009 11:26:30 +0000 http://authspot.com/poetry/broken-switch/#comment-919287 Losing one's sight must be a terrifying experience, unbalancing on so many levels. And as you cleverly described, everything would always look as it does in your memory, never changing or growing older. Interesting thought. Losing one’s sight must be a terrifying experience, unbalancing on so many levels. And as you cleverly described, everything would always look as it does in your memory, never changing or growing older. Interesting thought.

]]> By: Chris Marlowe II http://authspot.com/poetry/broken-switch/comment-page-1/#comment-919223 Chris Marlowe II Fri, 11 Sep 2009 09:59:11 +0000 http://authspot.com/poetry/broken-switch/#comment-919223 Sir, I want to Protest Firmly against the Comment made on this Page by the NickName Patrick Bernauw. It seems the NickName is making Fun of me in some sort of a Parody! He Is Not Chris Marlowe II, the One & Only Troll of Triond. I repeat: He Is Not! But I must confess, within these two awesome lines of your Poem... "all is dark, and all I see, is what is left in memory friends don’t age, seasons don’t change, I’m trapped in my own history" ... you've said All what can be Said about Yours Truly, the One & Only Troll of Triond Sir,

I want to Protest Firmly against the Comment made on this Page by the NickName Patrick Bernauw.

It seems the NickName is making Fun of me in some sort of a Parody!

He Is Not Chris Marlowe II, the One & Only Troll of Triond.

I repeat: He Is Not!

But I must confess, within these two awesome lines of your Poem…

“all is dark, and all I see, is what is left in memory
friends don’t age, seasons don’t change, I’m trapped in my own history”

… you’ve said All what can be Said about

Yours Truly,
the One & Only
Troll of Triond

]]> By: Patrick Bernauw http://authspot.com/poetry/broken-switch/comment-page-1/#comment-919217 Patrick Bernauw Fri, 11 Sep 2009 09:54:45 +0000 http://authspot.com/poetry/broken-switch/#comment-919217 Yes Sir, Let us Rage All Together Now, Rage Against the Dying of the Light! Yours Truly, the One & Only Troll of Triond Yes Sir,

Let us Rage All Together Now,
Rage Against the Dying of the Light!

Yours Truly,
the One & Only
Troll of Triond

]]> By: B Nelson http://authspot.com/poetry/broken-switch/comment-page-1/#comment-919053 B Nelson Fri, 11 Sep 2009 03:43:37 +0000 http://authspot.com/poetry/broken-switch/#comment-919053 well written, personally I hate when the lights go out, I can usually find a candle but can never find matches.. its spooky in the country when the lights go out, and least city folk have neighbours and can see if other people have electricity or not. well written, personally I hate when the lights go out, I can usually find a candle but can never find matches.. its spooky in the country when the lights go out, and least city folk have neighbours and can see if other people have electricity or not.

]]> By: Shelly Barclay http://authspot.com/poetry/broken-switch/comment-page-1/#comment-919049 Shelly Barclay Fri, 11 Sep 2009 03:12:30 +0000 http://authspot.com/poetry/broken-switch/#comment-919049 It's sad, but good. :) It’s sad, but good. :)

]]> By: gringoperry http://authspot.com/poetry/broken-switch/comment-page-1/#comment-919033 gringoperry Fri, 11 Sep 2009 02:02:58 +0000 http://authspot.com/poetry/broken-switch/#comment-919033 Are you in a coffin? Are you in a coffin?

]]> By: littlekid137 http://authspot.com/poetry/broken-switch/comment-page-1/#comment-919031 littlekid137 Fri, 11 Sep 2009 02:01:13 +0000 http://authspot.com/poetry/broken-switch/#comment-919031 I really do not like poems as I do not catch much of the pathos used but this one really caught me. Great work this captured you with each line. I really do not like poems as I do not catch much of the pathos used but this one really caught me. Great work this captured you with each line.

]]> By: David Crerand http://authspot.com/poetry/broken-switch/comment-page-1/#comment-919025 David Crerand Fri, 11 Sep 2009 01:45:25 +0000 http://authspot.com/poetry/broken-switch/#comment-919025 Great job Brad. Really liked the tension you built into each line. It gathers energy like a ball going down a hill. Kudos! Great job Brad. Really liked the tension you built into each line. It gathers energy like a ball going down a hill. Kudos!

]]>