Broken Trust

joystick7 on Dec 6, 2008

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Broken Trust of life.

I trusted you like anything,
You left me for personal gain,
You couldn’t understand my agony,
All my attempts went in vain
You never thought of looking back,
I felt so bad.
I could have forgiven you,
If you had turned back,
I no longer feel any joy.
I wish together we could enjoy.

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Debra. on Dec 6, 2008
Good work, Joystick.
Wise statement.
God bless.
Inna Tysoe on Dec 6, 2008
Hang in there.

Inna
CHAN LEE PENG on Dec 6, 2008
Good poem again!
Unofre Pili on Dec 6, 2008
Nice thoughts here…
Westbrook on Dec 6, 2008
This sums up the way I feel about someone now.
Darla Smith on Dec 6, 2008
This poem I can really relate to right now.
Morgana on Dec 6, 2008
Sounds like something I would say to a departing love—-If we can\’t be together then bye bye–take care!!
S A JOHNSON on Dec 6, 2008
I understand what you mean.
Joie Schmidt on Dec 6, 2008
A heartfelt poem that I’m certain most can relate to.

Blessings.

Sincerely,

-Liane Schmidt.
goodselfme on Dec 7, 2008
Your outpouring of inner turmoil is culminated with such sincerity of forgiveness.Allowing me to share this with you means you trust I care. I do and sure do wish you well, my friend!
Ben Johnson on Dec 7, 2008
A refreshing ending.
Preetam Kaushik on Dec 7, 2008
Hey Have you gone through…lol..nice words but I wanted more…

God Bless

Preetam
Jeoffrey Meister on Dec 7, 2008
So often people choose material things over friendship. . .it sounds like that’s what your relating to. I thing we’ve all experienced that. Nice poem.
Bren Parks on Dec 8, 2008
Very nicely done.
Tina Cassello on Dec 15, 2008
I’m not sure about your rhyming pattern but I like the thought you express.
hfj on Dec 18, 2008
We’ve all been there before. hang in there. Good write.
nutuba on Dec 22, 2008
Great imagery, great tension.
mrsgoode on Dec 23, 2008
I loved it.
Ruby Hawk on Jan 8, 2009
Love is sometimes heartbreaking but we get through it and go onto something better.Best wishes
Skribblz on Jan 16, 2009
Nice I like it. Very strong.

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