Asking God “why”?

The fateful error of Adam and Eve,
Among men still; devoured souls do grieve.
Stubbornly demanding answer of God,
Sludge soiled souls come with evil feet shod;
Strife girded loins dare impede Holy ground.
Insolently they God’s mercy have spent,
Having been provoked as Eve by Serpent;
Thinking equality in knowledge with
Creator God a right to have forthwith.
Their ignorance of the finite mind rolls
Freely from feces filled lips: foul souls.
Thinking the created can fathom all
Things equal with the creator: the gall.
Continually asking Holy One,” why”?
“Tell me and I’ll surely believe”, they cry.
God answers forthrightly: “You cursed liar.
Vanity and pride in evil conspire.
I gave to you all, and owe nothing,
Except free will choice of Master’s making.
Stand up man and hear me once, forever.
I created this world: my endeavor.
I gave you choice; your wrong choices found you,
Freedom comes with consequence: Your debt due.
Destruction you breathe: Still I beckon love.
I could have enslaved your soul from Above.
But then you would shake your vile fist shouting,
“Creator, set me free: I’ll cease doubting
And truly believe and serve thee always.”
My child, double-minded in all your ways:
Who are you speaking to when you ask why?
If you believe not now, who draweth nigh
To give answer. How foolish to broker
your soul to a non-existent joker.”

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  • CutestPrincess on Jan 20, 2009

    great one! great poetry! good job!

  • denus on Jan 20, 2009

    really great job!

    Keep up the good work!

    cheers.

  • Debra. on Jan 20, 2009

    Excellent! I enjoyed the read, my friend! God bless.

  • OhSugar on Jan 20, 2009

    Very Nice. I love watching them grow into their own little person with good attitudes toward life

  • Gayle Hamilton on Jan 20, 2009

    ” tour de force” (a masterpiece!)God blessings to you always.

  • Reilley on Jan 20, 2009

    Very well done, I liked it a lot.

  • Christine Ramsay on Jan 20, 2009

    Such powerful words. You are an artist.

    Christine

  • Darla Smith on Jan 20, 2009

    Great poem! I like it a lot!

  • rutherfranc on Jan 20, 2009

    is it just me? I feel you seriously preaching but still feel a bit of humor in it..

  • Sarah Elizabeth Hume on Jan 20, 2009

    Very nicely put,I enjoyed the language that you used…

  • Ruby Hawk on Jan 20, 2009

    I detected quite a bit of humor.I liked it.

  • Anne McNew on Jan 20, 2009

    Great!

  • Clay Hurtubise on Jan 20, 2009

    WOW! Great piece!
    Thanks,
    Clay

  • Inna Tysoe on Jan 20, 2009

    Well written.

    Inna

  • Mr Ghaz on Jan 21, 2009

    Great Poem. Very interesting and i really enjoy reading your work! Well done! Thanks for sharing

  • AC Hamilton III on Jan 21, 2009

    Thanks good people, I enjoy your comments…..Blessings!

    AC

  • Jim Miller on Jan 21, 2009

    Spoken with so much truth AC, It started way back in the garden, Didn’t it? A master piece as always,Thank you for sharing.

  • nutuba on Jan 23, 2009

    AC, this is sensational and it leaves me almost speechless. Besides the great message, the writing too is spectacular. I mean, “Sludge soiled souls come with evil feet shod” … this is brilliant stuff! Nicely done.

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