Brooklyn..sometimes the greatest place in the world…sometimes.

The Fire alarm went off at the projects,

but when they got their, no one spoke,

and there was the absence of fire and smoke,

it was just going to be a prank,

and that’s when a crime scene developed

in a project house basement, a dank,

the odor was so bad, it just stank,

it was an unfurnished place,

where an elderly black man

went missing without a trace,

and after completely opening up the basement door,

they found that missing man stretched across the floor,

he was in full rigor, and what’s more,

he was covered by a long sheet

of plastic painter’s tarp,

skin cooked in its own oil and heat,

shoe laces tied to his hands and feet,

and there death and drama would meet,

four homicide detectives and two firemen

stood over the body,

a dim basement with low light,

doing its best to fight off the night,

and they waited awhile,

it was like a nativity scene, Brooklyn style,

not in a manger,

but in a two story brick pile.

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Comments (10)
  • Uma Shankari on Jul 23, 2011

    nativity scene, Brooklyn style: well presented gory details.

  • MINISTER MARLENE SISTA REAL on Jul 23, 2011

    A nativity scene Brooklyn style. Volumes of meaning in four words. I once lived in bed-stuy as a run away at 16.
    Talk about a nativity from hell! Awesome poem. We need to know horrors to wake up…

  • ceegirl on Jul 23, 2011

    Great scenery and explanation.

  • LoveDoctor on Jul 23, 2011

    I love the imagery. Very good work Frank:) Oh, yeah I vote too. Lol.

  • chitragopi on Jul 24, 2011

    Powerful words create the gory picture!

  • beingwell on Jul 24, 2011

    Nice one.

  • Tulan on Jul 25, 2011

    Another creative poem. I liked it.

  • Ms marie fine on Jul 26, 2011

    This is kinda neat!!! :) I like it.

  • yes me on Jul 27, 2011

    Great imagery here Frank

  • Atanacio on Feb 5, 2012

    thanks guys for reading :)

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