My lovers hair and eyes,by LH.


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Brown hair blue eyes

 

She has brown hair

That makes me stare

Her eyes are like blue

Like I see the blue sea

 

She looks so fair

And does at me glare

And then as she stares

She shakens my hair

 

I have very little in any case

I will not mind

If she pulls the rest

 

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  • Debra. on Oct 12, 2009

    Very sweet!

  • T.Rex McGoogle on Oct 12, 2009

    Very nice poem again.

  • wonder on Oct 12, 2009

    Enjoyed it.

  • Petalm on Oct 12, 2009

    Very good poem.

  • Shamanz on Oct 13, 2009

    sweet.

  • WoodlandStar on Oct 13, 2009

    how gentle the words be read, and would that they be if she were red?

    My wife Jill has red hair, and who I often refer to as “Red” never stares but ofter flares!

    How about doing a poem on redheads?

    I love the poem…and look forward to one on redheads :) .

  • cardy on Oct 13, 2009

    Aww sweet enjoyed the read.

  • CA Johnson on Oct 13, 2009

    I enjoyed your poem.

  • speckledlily on Oct 14, 2009

    Nice poem, lovely honey…and you chose lovely pics, too.

  • LOVELYHONEY on Mar 10, 2010

    thanks to all who have brought this poem to lime light thanks

  • LOVELYHONEY on Mar 10, 2010

    ONCE AGAIN I STUMBLE UPON MY OWN WORK ISN’T IT GR888888888888

  • LOVELYHONEY on Jun 21, 2010

    NO MORE HAVE COMMENTED THE MOST READ POEM ITS LOVELY’S VERSION

  • NIYATI BHAT on Jun 22, 2010

    Very nice and enjoyable :)

  • LOVELYHONEY on Jul 17, 2010

    thanks for the read

  • LOVELYHONEY on Sep 30, 2010

    aqnother lovely poem read by so many u will also like it too

  • LOVELYHONEY on Sep 30, 2010

    another lovely poem read by so many u will also like it too

  • LOVELYHONEY on Sep 30, 2010

    another lovely poem
    read by so many
    u will also like it too

  • LOVELYHONEY on Dec 14, 2010

    recollection for some who can’t dig deep it now surfaces

  • LOVELYHONEY on Dec 31, 2010

    This poem is being still read by many,
    But no comments are left by any,
    Perhaps the brown hair and blue eyes take away the glare
    I don’t really care,
    How many stare,
    But if they love the emotion in me,
    Why are they not
    Leaving comments as many

    Brown eyes and blue hair
    Can’t be a combination,
    But blue eyes steal the heavens
    And
    Brown hair the
    Tails of many women

  • LOVELYHONEY on Mar 21, 2011

    thank you very much all

  • LOVELYHONEY on Jun 15, 2011

    this has been my best

    most read poem

    but very few comments

    no lament ,

    do read the beauty

    in each comment,,
    every moment!

  • LOVELYHONEY on Jun 19, 2011

    You have given the lead
    And
    I’m grateful to uuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu
    Others may follow suit
    Let’s get out of the graves,
    Of our ancestors
    And
    Compose each poem afresh,
    Unique and out of the blue
    AND
    WE ALL ARE SURE
    ALL WILL LOVE
    THIS NEW TREND TOO …

    LET’S MAKE A BEGINNING
    AS change is the womb
    Of a newer generation
    How I wish all of us knew…

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