A man’s life blown away and a child’s innocence is lost.

It only took a bullet
To blast his life away;
A sudden crack, my father fell
And motionless he lay.
I watched the birds rise screaming
Too late their warning cried.
It only took a bullet
The day my father died.
It only took a moment,
My life changed at that sound;
I knew I would not grow into
A man to stand around
Who waited for a bullet
To bring about his end.
My hand would be upon the gun -
A bullet for my friend.

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  • BC Doan on Oct 20, 2008

    Powerful words, and pictures!

  • Melissa Joyce on Oct 20, 2008

    I love the emotion in “I watch the birds rise screaming”.

  • Allison West on Oct 20, 2008

    This is very powerful and poignant. You are very talented, I really enjoy all your work here. -A

  • Terri Lane on Oct 21, 2008

    Thank you BC,Melissa and Allison for all your encouragement.

  • Sliwowski on Oct 21, 2008

    Hey Terri. You’ve got a lot of talent in poetry. Good luck !!!
    -Sliwowski

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