Bubbles for Me

cardy on Jan 14, 2010

A poem, of a bubble bath with candles.

Image by dustpuppy via Flickr

By the dancing candle light,
this just feels so right.

The silence is mine alone,
even my lavender scented bubbles.
Have a happy crinkling tone.

I let the soft water engulf me,
this is my place to be.

I let out a peaceful sigh,
and slip slowly down.
time seems to pass me bye,

the scented water ripples in response.

My bubbles seem louder,
all at once

I am submerged,
I have a need to splurge.

A simple pleasure in life is a bubble bath by candle light,
am I right?

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Comments (10)

LOVELYHONEY on Jan 14, 2010
ABSOLUTELY….GR8888888 LOVELY
Mickey Pig Knuckles on Jan 15, 2010
Yes in deed Cardy you are right. I kind of felt like I was slipping beneath the waters level to soak under all of those bubbles. What a descriptive poem you have composed here as the visual images captured within my minds eye were extremely clear. Now I must grab the towel and dry my hair lol. Thank You for sharing a little of your very creative personality and especially your passion of writing with us all. Excellent Poem Cardy…

Mickey Pig Knuckles
Lord Banks on Jan 15, 2010
I’m sitting here at 0c and I’d love a hot bath bubbles or not! nice poem good work. LB
Darla Cooke on Jan 15, 2010
Great poem!
giftarist on Jan 15, 2010
Like it!
Christine Ramsay on Jan 15, 2010
You most definitely are right. thjere is nothing I like better. Lovely work.

Christine
oldster on Jan 16, 2010
Oh so very soothing. Hope you don’t go all wrinkly like me.
qasimdharamsy on Jan 16, 2010
Nice one…
lillyrose on Jan 23, 2010
Oooooo you sure are right! a glass of champagne would be good with that also! Beautiful poem.
Cynthia Cox on Jan 27, 2010
add a headphone or a book and it would be my place to be, if only reality would allow time of peace as this. relaxing poem.thank you.

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