A haiku.

Building dreams until

they pierce the sky and topple

rubble at my feet.

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  • Aiyanna on Feb 1, 2010

    How true!!! Dreams we have are unlimited and they can touch the sky but when they break they can crush everything including your faith to dust…
    Nice write, thank you for sharing!! :)

    Am back after been rather erratic for 2 months… Please do check my work out… :)

  • Lorenzo A. Fernandez Jr. on Feb 3, 2010

    a marvelous piece!

  • willie wondka on Oct 20, 2011

    nicely written like a pro

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