Built for Comfort

Authoress Terry E. Lyle on Nov 23, 2009

Tags: body, cars, chassis.

Comical tale about being overweight.

Being, overweight doesn’t make you look bad, hold your head up and be happy and glad. It’s not the outer appearance that makes you a star; it’s your inner beauty that wins by far.

Don’t worry about not being thin or built like a rock, because being built for comfort is what it’s about. You are heat in the winter and shade in the summer, like a big classy car, you’re built like a hummer.

Everything doesn’t suit everyone, just handle your business and get your job done. You know the saying that you have a body by Fisher and a mind by Mattel, but I have a body built for comfort that makes the men yell, with alluring secrets but not show and tell.

And for some of you who don’t know what that means, well Fisher makes cars and Mattel’s a barbi doll team. So your body might be built with a cute little chassis, but your mind is childish and as slow as molasses.

So you can think what you want about this big old body, but I caught you staring at me, because you know I’m a Hottie!

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LoveDoctor on Nov 23, 2009
Lol. this is a great one. I like the part of the hummer and molasses. Also, very nice message about the importance of inner beauty. Most people only care about the outer appearance. Hopefully, they will read this one carefully. I thought you meant Mattel for Barbies.
Teves on Nov 23, 2009
Beautiful work…
drelayaraja on Nov 23, 2009
very good topic. Nice work.
wonder on Nov 23, 2009
Full of insight and a great message.We mostly bother the external that doesn’t count.
Pinaki Ghosh on Nov 23, 2009
nice job done.
Rinks Desai on Nov 23, 2009
Thanks for sharing this
Darla Cooke on Nov 24, 2009
Very well said!
cutedrishti8 on Nov 24, 2009
Nice piece of write
diamondpoet on Nov 24, 2009
I am living proof that controlling your weight doesn’t have to be difficult. Good write.
nutmegeyes on Nov 24, 2009
LMAO,
That was right on time I needed a good laught. Thanks
Frances Lawrence on Nov 24, 2009
Powerful words, well said.
LOVELYHONEY on Nov 25, 2009
thank god i am yet not as big as the ROCK OF GIBRALTER I can still manage by BULK
GR8
LH
V rank on Nov 29, 2009
You have a one of a kind of style in poetry…! Great work.. keep it up…
jimbob1 on Dec 4, 2009
Miss T – This is precious…conveys an important message in an unusually light-hearted way. Thanks for sharing…
Aaron Paul Hicks on Dec 6, 2009
Great poem,
loved this very much,
best regards,
Aaron x
traetrae on Dec 7, 2009
Say that girl. I’m full body myself and sometimes focus on the negative instead of the positive. Great perspective!
nutmegeyes on Feb 16, 2010
Well I prefer a big ride that’s built for comfort.
yes me on Apr 1, 2010
That was a great write Terry enjoyed your take on a topical item…. cheers with a cheeky gring.

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