This is a poem I wrote about a Bull.


Bull Riding Poem

On this very hot, hot summers day.

I’m strapped in my cubicle, the rider reader to play,  

I am quickly released as the siren goes off,

The rider old ‘Tom better not think ill go soft.

It is always such a pain having humans on me,

They are always cruel, don’t you see,

They ride me with no consent,

Sticking to me like hard cement,

And as I manage to shake them off my head,

They flee, as I see the sight of red,

I race to the red, ready to fight,

But everything goes dark just like night,

I have been tricked, tricked again,

On this very hot, hot summers day.

- Darkplanner

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  • MohammadG on Sep 24, 2009

    Please “I like it” if you enjoyed the poem.

  • phantomfan94 on Sep 27, 2009

    That poem was REALLY’ awesome. GOOD JOB!!

  • MohammadG on Sep 28, 2009

    Thanks.

  • Leonardo da Vinci E. on Oct 18, 2009

    I like poems that do work, and this poem does that by speaking up from the animal’s perspective.

  • Jenny on Mar 17, 2012

    Mohammad,

    I would like to use your poem for my poetry unit in my English class. Can you please tell me your full name by emailing me at Gibsondietrich@gmail.com? Thank you. I would greatly appreciate it. I want to teach them how to read poetry,and to determine a poem’s narrator. I wanted to use an example from an animal’s perspective. I think your poem is perfect for my unit. Thanks in advance.

    Jenny

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