Limerick.

I found a big bum on my Sofa

Winking at me, he said “nice to meet yah”

Politely, I said “would you mind

Just moving your behind?

But don’t leave, I might need a Cuddle later.”

 

Wishing all my Triond Friends a Good Weekend. :)

7
Liked it
Comments (11)
  • Dreamy777 on Jul 8, 2011

    Cute I like it LadyElena. You have a great weekend too.

  • Eunice Tan on Jul 8, 2011

    So nice!

  • Lynn Hollis on Jul 9, 2011

    He looks friendly and cute – but huge…

  • Martin Kloess on Jul 9, 2011

    clever indeed.

  • samgoldencoffee on Jul 9, 2011

    cute bear….
    nice piece.

  • foxpete88 on Jul 9, 2011

    nice one..thanks

  • Dennis N OBrien on Jul 10, 2011

    Well done – a quality limerick.

  • UncleSam on Jul 10, 2011

    Always Nice Share From Wonderful Elena

  • Suni51 on Jul 11, 2011

    That was a real sweet one from you LE.

  • KittyK on Jul 11, 2011

    Brilliant!

  • Atanacio on Jul 17, 2011

    I am assuming a Bum is a bear? Here, a bum is a drunk.. a hobo.. a derelict…

    but thanks for the share Frank

Leave a Comment

Hi there!

Hello! Welcome to Authspot, the spot for creative writing.
Read some stories and poems, and be sure to subscribe to our feed!

Find the Spot

Loading