A poem.

Hearing what you have to say..

A huge burden on my heart

Does not cease to stay..

I had loved you from the very start

And did love you ever more

Till the very end..

You speak of me as a heartless girl

Telling friends and foes

How my love for you did fall

Speaking openly of your woes

To them, the people

Who hardly even knew us

For a whole couple years

I did give you all of me

Through thick and thin, joys and tears

My love, so sincere, was there for you to see

You took me for granted…

Never did see what I really wanted

My lips themselves formed a smile

At the very sight of you, my love

Yet you would greet me all the while

With a look as icy as the snow from above..

Faults you found in me

I became the person I never knew I could be

I’ve been branded the “bad girl” today

But, all the love I could give you

You’ve already thrown away..

The love that my heart held true

Has withered and shrivelled..

As the black rose cut and dried

I have loved you from the very start

Now things have changed and

We both have enacted and ended the part

You call me a heartless girl today

Never caring..never seeing…

The huge burden on my heart..

Oh! Why does it not cease to stay..?

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  • Christine Ramsay on Aug 22, 2011

    This is such a heartfelt poem. you have expressed the way you feel so well.

  • Ngala Min on Aug 22, 2011

    Thank you Christine. I guess it just comes from the heart… :)

  • iluvpoetry on Aug 22, 2011

    Love it!!! :P

  • Ngala Min on Aug 22, 2011

    thank you :)

  • Rosettaartist1 on Aug 23, 2011

    There is a lot of meaning in this.

  • Ngala Min on Aug 23, 2011

    =)

  • randylovesdar on Aug 25, 2011

    Loved the poem. I also write from the heart…… I had actually written my own wedding vows and will be posting them on here soon.

  • Ngala Min on Aug 25, 2011

    @randylovesdar thank you =) will surely check out your post

  • aroosamorose on Aug 28, 2011

    Lovely poem situation like me.

  • Ngala Min on Aug 28, 2011

    =) then i hope we both see better days @aroosamorose

  • Walden Gray on Aug 29, 2011

    Its really hard to express……………it is just so beautiful…….the way things have been said!!…..Really love the way you write!!……

  • Ngala Min on Aug 29, 2011

    thank you yet again Walden Gray ^_^ glad you liked it!

  • shreeja on Sep 2, 2011

    I can feel the sad face behind this

  • Ngala Min on Sep 4, 2011

    shreeja….m glad i could express myself so…=/

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