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Burning, a Haiku

Annie Hintsala on Mar 13, 2011
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Haiku should be a snapshot, seventeen syllables that give you a feeling, a look, a window to somewhere else.

Your blood is like fire,

The touch of your hand burns me.

Sun comes from your eyes.

Image by *Emmett* via Flickr

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  • Tiki33 on Mar 13, 2011

    Nice one! Thanks for sharing this haiku with the triond family.

  • Drew Scott on Mar 13, 2011

    Thanks for posting, i really like this one!

  • atta muhammad on Mar 13, 2011

    great share

  • webseowriters on Mar 13, 2011

    A nice entry

  • rappeter13 on Mar 13, 2011

    Great article.

  • CHIPMUNK on Mar 14, 2011

    good read

  • Rod Ferrandino on Mar 14, 2011

    You say a lot with a little.

  • D G Smith on Mar 22, 2011

    I liked this one a lot

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