Poem I made when I was depressed.

I’m working to escape what I’m feeling.

Disturb form what is happening,

Don’t know where I’ am going,

Please stop! I’ am breaking.

So I’m keeping myself busy

What can you say? what a pity

Because I can’t escape reality

God give me strength, Hear me…

But for now… I’ll just continue having a busy body.

If not I might have a suicidal tendency.

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  • Authoress Terry E. Lyle on Nov 17, 2009

    OMG…Please don’t give in to dispair, we all have bad days from time to time….just stay encouraged. Peace & Blessing.

  • Starpisces on Nov 18, 2009

    Don’t despair, everthing will be fine, take care… hope you are okay now..

  • Stan Wilson on Nov 18, 2009

    dont give up..its very good effort on your part…

  • diamondpoet on Nov 20, 2009

    Very nice I really enjoyed.

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