But …………?( Haiku)

girishpuri on Feb 1, 2012

Tags: fate

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You Are my Life………But?

You are in my blood …

You are in my veins…

You are my life…

You are every where…

But..?

…….Please tell me.

Are you ?

…………………..in my luck line…?

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Comments (24)

Saurav Banerjee on Feb 1, 2012
Interesting write yet again.
mdrkarim7 on Feb 1, 2012
Gotta be a ghost!
AmosTheCat on Feb 1, 2012
Is there a disaster line? Good poem. Thanks.
lovinglyoursjuny on Feb 1, 2012
Nice one
Dora77 on Feb 1, 2012
This was so good…A twisting line called Luck.
Safa on Feb 1, 2012
got me wondering for a bit…nice post
jotomy on Feb 1, 2012
beautiful
lapasan on Feb 1, 2012
It’s good to be said to an spouse.
Aroosa Gloomy on Feb 1, 2012
ya if u wana make lol
realityspeaks on Feb 1, 2012
Nice share.
Dragoonk on Feb 1, 2012
Good question!
Ruby Hawk on Feb 1, 2012
Well done,
dodolbete on Feb 1, 2012
hopefully so ^,^
Marquis de Joker on Feb 1, 2012
A nice look on fate
girishpuri on Feb 1, 2012
thanks to all
xphantoms on Feb 2, 2012
Like it
avissado on Feb 2, 2012
g…haiku is supposed to be 3 lines only and 17 syllables
girishpuri on Feb 3, 2012
thanks all
aheed411 on Feb 3, 2012
Wow
Angelji on Feb 4, 2012
Beautiful lines Girish,,,but .,,,,,
sanataryal on Feb 4, 2012
Girish, but …yes, she is yours I guess…but …you are one of the best hiku writers so far.
Moses Ingram on Feb 4, 2012
Good poem, thanks for sharing.
Lady Sunshine on Feb 16, 2012
Bleh.
Safa on Feb 28, 2012
thumbs up

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